Thursday, February 12, 2009

Star



A bright star was faraway


Smiling above in dark sky


One day I dreamed of catching it


And when I was about to touch it


I found it nothing but stardust

7 التعليقات:

Icíar said...

One good reflection about the desire itself, about how important is living our own reality, the one we just have. :D, nice picture too

semsemaya said...

Thanx querida for commenting:)
I like your idea a lot although it wasn't the idea I was thinking of when I wrote those words but, it is really nice that others can see other point of views through them:D. I am glad u liked the picture.:)

Icíar said...

jajajajaja, i gues this things may happen when we deal the poetry world. But.... why can't you put here the intention you had when you wrote it?

semsemaya said...

My main idea when I wrote those words was about those people whom we meet in our life thinking that they are glamorous like far stars but when we get really close to them we find them nothing but stardus.

Anonymous said...

I once heard, i don't remember the source : "no butler thinks about his gentleman that he is a great gentleman". . . .

semsemaya said...
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semsemaya said...

lol yes, all of us are full of shortcomings so when others close to us they see us little differntly than those who are far but, some people fool us with thier overylighted brightness.

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